Frozen Heart

Frozen HeartBy Annabelle Blume

Publisher: Inkspell Publishing
Publication Date: August 7, 2012
Genre: Futuristic/Dystopian
Source: Publisher

Cressenda knows how to survive. With her sled dogs as her only companions, she’s spent the past ten years hiding in the snow covered wilderness from the oppressive regime of the Affinity. When a routine trip to civilization takes a turn for the worst, Cressenda is forced to take refuge with the enemy or lose her life to the frozen countryside.

But Beckett, a Guard of the Affinity, is more than a man in uniform. His desperate need to help Cressenda escape both- the blizzard and the Affinity- makes her feelings for him all the more troubling. Will Beckett be true to his word and set Cressenda free? Will her heart let her leave after all they’ve shared?

Goodreads Summary

This was a confusing book, starting when I tried to decide which genre to call it. It sounds like a dystopian: society has been oppressed by the government and the non-conformists are Outliers, in hiding and surviving by the skin of their teeth. It also sounds futuristic. There’ve been genetic experiments on crops and animals and technology is way ahead of what we have now. There was even a Reaper mentioned and even though I don’t think it was a paranormal kind of Reaper, it wasn’t explained.

Cressie lives with only her two dogs in the arctic, hiding from the Affinity, the lock-step government program all citizens are required to follow that also forces them to be Matched with whomever they are genetically compatible. As an Outlier, Cressie is in constant fear of being caught not having the proper papers, so she avoids public contact as much as possible, only going to the trade market every other month for necessities. This trip turns into a disaster when an Affiliate Guard figures out who she is; for some reason Cressie can’t trust, he doesn’t turn her in but takes her to his home instead.

I loved the way the book started out. Seriously loved it. There were a couple of brief scenes with Cressie’s parents ten years earlier that gave some background for why she would become an Outlier and it really brought that part of the story together for me. Skip ahead to an awesome, self-sufficient Cressie. She knows being alone sucks, but she’s dealing with it in the best way she knows how, trading love and affection with her sled dogs. The descriptions of their journey to the trading post were gorgeous. I wanted more of the sled traveling through the snow and forest, up the side of the mountain. When Cressie made it to the market, the story started to head downhill and it never really recovered.

The trading market itself was interesting, almost medieval if you didn’t count the Affinity guards wandering around. When Beckett grabs Cressie and finds out she’s an Outlier, I didn’t know how he was supposed to have gotten her away from the other guard unnoticed. He whisked her away to his homey cabin where they’re trapped for a few days during a blizzard. I’m sure I was supposed to think Beckett was very sensitive and sexy but I just couldn’t. His story was just so perfectly sad, his reactions just so perfectly stereotypically manly that it felt a little chilly. I didn’t ever get why he was helping Cressie hide from the Affinity when everything he’d done so far in his life was Affinity. He just felt too smooth. By contrast, the Cressie that I’d loved acted like she was possessed, yelling at him one minute, soothing him with homemade chili the next. My brain was scrambled with these two. All I could think was, please, no sexy stuff, let them just fall in love and leave it there! Alas, my prayers were not answered and confusion followed. A girl who’s been in seclusion since she was sixteen is sexually experienced? Ooookay.

There’s an HEA (as much as there can be in a dystopian) but I was awfully surprised by the specifics of it. It was just more proof that I didn’t know who Beckett was because it really made no sense. At least there was no cliffhanger, even if there’s room for a sequel.

My Summary: It’s entirely possible that if this was a longer book, I would have enjoyed it. More space to learn about Beckett, to figure out how his relationship to Cressie evolved and to have a reason for that ending would have gone a long way towards improving my feelings about the story. Heck, just more about Beckett would have been good. Their romance didn’t seem to fit in this small space for me. In a lot of ways, Cressie felt like the alpha in the relationship and I’m petty enough to say that bothered me.

My Rating: C
Barbara

Cinder

By Marissa Meyer

Publisher: Feiwel & Friends
Publication Date: January 3, 2012
Genre: Young Adult Futuristic
Source: NetGalley

Humans and androids crowd the raucous streets of New Beijing. A deadly plague ravages the population. From space, a ruthless lunar people watch, waiting to make their move. No one knows that Earth’s fate hinges on one girl. . . .

Cinder, a gifted mechanic, is a cyborg. She’s a second-class citizen with a mysterious past, reviled by her stepmother and blamed for her stepsister’s illness. But when her life becomes intertwined with the handsome Prince Kai’s, she suddenly finds herself at the center of an intergalactic struggle, and a forbidden attraction. Caught between duty and freedom, loyalty and betrayal, she must uncover secrets about her past in order to protect her world’s future.

Goodreads Summary

We all know the classic tale of Cinderella, right? In Marissa Meyers adaptation, Cinder is a cyborg: a mostly human girl with a few steel parts. She was in a horrific accident as a child which resulted in both of her parents death, and would have lost hers had a surgeon not gotten to her in time. She doesn’t remember anything from before the accident, but she does briefly remember the man who adopted her and brought her to New Beijing. Shortly after she arrived, he died of the plague, leaving Cinder in the care of his wife and two daughters. His wife detests the very sight of Cinder, and blames her for her husband’s death.

The plague is ravaging its way through the world, and the emperor of New Beijing has fallen victim to its clutches. The country is on edge, and Cinder is drafted by the royal scientists to test her for cures. She meets Prince Kai, the son of the sick emperor, and immediately falls for his charm but keeps her cyborg state a secret. The plague isn’t the only enemy the world is facing, and the evil queen of Lunar is threatening her way into Prince Kai’s life. Cinder learns secrets about herself she never knew, and she is slowly discovering she may be the only hope the world has from plague, and the Lunar Queen’s evil motives.

This book was kind of blah for me. I love the fairytale of Cinderella, but this version just didn’t do it for me. The story was kind of slow and wandering, and I bet that if all the plot fillers were removed, it could have been told in about ten pages. There wasn’t a lot of action in this book, and it seemed more of a set-up of the world and characters than anything else. There was some slight action at the very end of the book, but the first 98% of it took awhile to get through.

I also had a hard time connecting with Cinder. I didn’t get any emotion or feeling from her, and it made it hard for me to care about what happened to her. I did feel sorry for her though, since she’s had some tough breaks in her life. Maybe now that we’ve got the world building out of the way, Cinder can develop the kind of qualities I look for in a heroine. I’m hoping in the next book she can become the kind of heroine I grow to respect and admire, and want to have a happily ever after. That is not the case after this first book.

My Summary: I’ve seen several positive reviews on this book, so perhaps this is one of those books that didn’t work for me, but might interest you. The pace was just too meandering and there wasn’t enough excitement or emotion in it. It wasn’t the worst book I’ve ever read, by any means, but it certainly wasn’t the best. I’m am going to read the sequel and give the series one more shot. I’m crossing my fingers that the second book turns out better for me than this one.

My Rating: B-

Cait