Mini Review: Once a Witch (Witch #1)

Once a WitchBy Carolyn MacCullough

Publisher: Houghton Mifflin Harcourt
Publication Date: September 6, 2010
Genre: Young Adult Paranormal
Source: Purchased

Tamsin Greene comes from a long line of witches, and she was supposed to be one of the most Talented among them.  But Tamsin’s magic never showed up.  Now seventeen, Tamsin attends boarding school in Manhattan, far from her family.  But when a handsome young professor mistakes her for her very Talented sister, Tamsin agrees to find a lost family heirloom for him.  The search – and the stranger – will prove to be more sinister than they first appeared, ultimately sending Tamsin on a treasure hunt through time that will unlock the secret of her true identity, unearth the sins of her family, and unleash a power so vengeful that it could destroy them all.

Goodreads Summary

At her birth, her grandmother proclaimed that Tamsin would be the most powerful and a beacon for all of the Talented, but she was the one whose ability never manifested itself.  Teased and pitied by the other Talents, she leaves to go to school with other normal kids.  Home on break, she’s watching the family store when she’s mistaken for her sister Rowena and accepts a task to find a missing clock for an NYU professor, hoping to prove to her family that she can do something.Back at school in New York, Tamsin reconnects with childhood friend Gabriel, whose Talent happens to be finding things.  He reluctantly agrees to help her and admits a secret – he also has the ability to find things that exist in the past.  The clock the professor wants found was lost some time ago and despite the danger of upsetting events in the present, Gabriel takes Tamsin back in time to get it.  Once she gets her hands on it though, she realizes that the clock isn’t just a clock and the professor is her family’s biggest enemy.

I really shouldn’t have liked this book as much as I did.  It was full of over the top drama, convenient plot twists, quite a few TSTL moments from characters that were supposed to know better and in places, I had absolutely no idea what was going on.  Nearly everyone has a different Talent, so it’s a little chaotic, and there’s some business about power stored in an inanimate object and a guardian and blood drinkers.. so, yeah.  But in the middle of the story, it makes more sense for the most part and is sort of exciting a lot of the time.

Tamsin herself was most obviously the reason I stuck with the story.  She got a raw deal from her family, especially her awful self-centered sister Rowena, and I wanted her to stick it to them, frankly.  I cheered every time she did something no one else could – she was Supergirl all of a sudden – and felt her pain when she realized exactly what her Talent was and what had been kept from her.  I liked her little budding romance with Gabriel – there were some swoony moments with him that were especially sweet and totally PG-rated.

This doesn’t end on a giant cliffhanger, but it does lead into important events in the next book, which is the final one and is going to be released in August.  I absolutely recommend you read this first if you’re planning on reading it because even with the quick recap at the beginning of Always a Witch, you’ll likely be lost if you don’t.

My Rating: B-

Barbara

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Wither (Chemical Garden #1)

WitherBy Lauren DeStefano

Publisher: Simon & Schuster
Published: March 22, 2011
Genre: Young Adult Dystopian
Source: Publisher

What if you knew exactly when you would die?

Thanks to modern science, every human being has become a ticking genetic time bomb – males only live to age twenty-five, and females only live to age twenty.  In this bleak landscape, young girls are kidnapped and forced into polygamous marriages to keep the population from dying out.

When sixteen-year-old Rhine Ellery is taken by the Gatherers to become a bride, she enters a world of wealth and privilege.  Despite her husband Linden’s genuine love for her, and a tenuous among her sister wives, Rhine has one purpose: to escape – to find her twin brother and go home.

But Rhine has more to contend with than losing her freedom.  Linden’s eccentric father is bent on finding an antidote to the genetic virus that is getting closer to taking his son, even if it means collecting corpses in order to test his experiments.  With the help of Gabriel, a servant Rhine is growing dangerously attracted to, Rhine attempts to break free, in the limited time she has left.

Goodreads Summary

Once in a while I read something I enjoy so much that I’m utterly stumped about what to write about it so that I don’t come across as an incoherent idiot who only knows a handful of words (awesome, incredible!).  I don’t read a lot of dystopia (and this probably could be classified as Dystopian Lite, which I think is going to put a lot of reviewers in either the love-it or disappointed-by-it camps) but this reminded me that I ought to be reading it more often.  This is easily among my top ten best novels of the past year.

Orphaned at a young age, Rhine is living a hardscrabble life with her twin brother Rowan when she’s grabbed by the Gatherers looking for wives for House Governor Linden.  She’s drugged and taken to his opulent estate, where she becomes one of his pampered sister wives, along with thirteen year-old Cecily and eighteen year-old Jenna.  Rhine finds out that they’ve been brought there to replace Linden’s first and only wife Rose, who’s dying.  Linden is in love with Rose, and Rhine resembles her a great deal.  When Rose dies, he comes to Rhine, who offers comfort only – she’s determined that she won’t be used for sex with him, but she’ll manipulate him in any way she can to find a way to escape.  As a year in the house with her sister wives passes, she becomes closer to both Linden and her server Gabriel and earns the scrutiny of Linden’s evil father, Housemaster Vaughn, who’ll do anything to keep her in the house.

I’ll get out of the way what didn’t work for me first, mostly because for me, it ended up being eclipsed by what did.  I also want to mention that for anyone looking for a lot of action in a dystopian, this probably won’t be up your alley – this is heavily character-driven, most of the story is set inside the estate and the action that does happen is in the last quarter-ish of the book.

I didn’t feel any significant emotional connection to Gabriel, Rhine’s server, companion and potential romantic interest.  I knew a lot of facts about him, but I didn’t have the investment with his character that I did with the sister wives and Linden.  His contact with Rhine seemed very dry and distant to me.  I hate to say it, but he seemed more brotherly than anything else.

I missed some of the contrast between the poor side of society and the rich that Linden lived in that might have given the story an even more powerful social statement.  Beyond some bits of things Rhine told Cecily and things from the beginning of the story, not a lot was shown about things from where Rhine and her twin Rowan lived.  I don’t know that I ever really understood the mechanics of the separations in the two societies – why one felt like Max Max while the other was ultra posh.

I think Housemaster Vaughn was underused.  He was a huge evil entity in the household, conducting nasty experiments on mysterious corpses in the basement, but the whole thing was left largely unexplored.  Maybe I watched too much Scooby Doo when I was a kid because I expected there to be more of the plot connected to it than there was.  I don’t really understand that much about the virus that killed Rose either – it seems like it will be important and there was a lot of time available to explain some of it, but nothing really happened with it.

Then there was what worked.  There were no details too small and it lent a lush, technicolor feel to the entire household.  Rose was obsessed with candy that turned her tongue colors and later it became a symbol of communication between Rhine and Gabriel.  Rhine’s maid Dierdre did her makeup and clothing and there were gorgeous descriptions of her artistry.  When Rhine went outdoors to swim or play in the autumn leaves, if I wasn’t distracted by anything else going on in the room, I could feel the slide of the water or the sharp edges of the cold, wet leaves.  There’s a comforting repetition of description of things that reappear often in the household so that they became familiar.  By the end of the book, even Linden’s gold teeth seemed charming.  The story is truly a sensory feast.

Rhine is a wonderfully messy, real character.  She contemplates lying to just about everyone at one point or another and doesn’t hesitate to manipulate Linden every chance she gets.  She doesn’t trust anyone in the house (rightly so) and doesn’t go out of her way to help her sister wives for the most part, even though she occasionally has almost maternal feelings for the absurdly immature Cecily and worries about Jenna, who vacillates between being withdrawn and suicidal and accepting her place in the household.  Linden adores her almost from the start.  Her resemblance to Rose helped, but then she manipulated it beyond that, giving him the things that no one else had in years: praise for his work, friendship (even if it was false) and affection (also mostly false for a while).

It’ll take me forever to say what I loved about the other characters, so I’ll limit myself to Linden.  He starts out as a villain – after all, he’s the reason the girls are kidnapped and they’re forced to marry him, are going to have to have sex with him and stay with him until they die.  Linden is something a little more and less.  He’s his father’s puppet, which makes him seem a little clueless and ought to have made him even less likable, but there was something about him that made me hope that I see him in the next book.  He seemed to genuinely love Rhine and I think there were things she saw in him that were good.

My Summary:  It’s probably only appropriate that I end with some rambling nonsense.  I know this is getting some comparisons to Matched, but if anyone out there is ah, as “retro” as I am, this had a little Logan’s Run in it for me (the movie, not the crappy series) too.  This really stands apart from anything else though – the pace of the story suits DeStefano’s lovely, lyrical writing.  Normally I get antsy for the second book in a series because it leaves me on a cliffhanger with a character – this didn’t end that way, but as soon as I closed the last page of this I immediately wanted the next book, just because it was so good I didn’t want it to be over.

My Rating:  A-  

Barbara

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Live Wire (Elite Ops #6)

Live WireBy Lora Leigh

Publisher: St. Martin’s
Publication Date: March 1, 2011
Genre: Romantic Suspense
Source: Purchased

Meet Captain Jordan Malone.  For years he has been a silent warrior and guardian, operating independant of government protocol or oversight, leading his team of Elite Op agents to fight against terror at all costs.  A legend in the field, Jordan’s true identity has remained a mystery even to his own men…until now.Tehya Talamosi, codename Enigma, is a force to be reckoned with.  A woman this striking spells nothing but trouble for Jordan.  Armed with killer secrets – and body to die for – she’ll bring Jordan to his knees as they both take on the most deadly mission they have ever faced.  Because this time, it’s personal…

Goodreads Summary

While this can be read as a standalone, this is the sixth in Leigh’s Elite Ops series and she’s fond of mixing in characters and situations from past books – and since it’s the last, there’s a bit more of it.  You don’t need to know the specifics of them since she usually gives enough of a sketch that you get where the story is coming from, but there are a lot of relationships and situations that have been established by the time Live Wire takes place. Jordan’s nephew Nathan/Noah is here too – he started the series, spinning it off from Leigh’s SEALs series in the first Elite Ops book, Wild Card where Teyha first showed up.

Live Wire started with a little glimpse back to when Teyha was first recruited into Jordan’s Elite Ops team – she’d just killed her father, a slave trader personally responsible for killing several people directly related to the Live Ops.  The team staged her death and now they wanted to put her on Jordan’s team as his communications expert.  Knowing his intense attraction to her would be a problem, he tried to refuse, but was ultimately overruled.

Six years later, Jordan’s team is being disbanded.  Teyha’s got a new identity set up and is ready to move on with her life as a civilian and Jordan’s at a crossroads – to stay with the Ops or leave like Teyha.  During her years as his assistant, Tehya fell in love with Jordan, but he’s convinced himself that all they have is chemistry.  The night before they’re scheduled to close the facility, he decides to sleep with her, but afterwards tells her he won’t love her – and she vanishes before he can talk to her again.

Nine months later living a relatively happy, quiet new life under her new name, Teyha’s suddenly surrounded by the Ops team, led again by Jordan.  They’d been keeping tabs on some of her father’s cronies and suddenly her new name and location popped up – her identity isn’t a secret anymore and the team thinks that someone wants her dead.  The sudden drop-in from the Ops team was necessary because no one could reach her on her sat phone.  All of her former team members have been trying to stay in touch with her for months but were never able to – Jordan included.  Someone on the inside had tampered with the phone so she’d be out of contact.

I think even Leigh must be glad to be getting to the end of this series, although from what I understand, there’s going to be a spin-off of this series called Wounded Warriors.  The best thing I can say about this is that it’s suffering from series fatigue. The plots and characters are starting to blur a bit – I can’t remember which Ops guy is who anymore, other than Nathan/Noah, and he gets remembered because he showed up in two books and his full book was the most heartbreaking.  There’s danger and action here, but it’s pretty much matched by the amount of sex, and the emotional connection between Jordan and Teyha didn’t really move me like some of the other couples’ did.

Jordan is standard Alpha – the grouchy commander-type, vowing never to love anyone because he’s seen too many of his men lose the ones they love and he swears it won’t happen to him.  I really, intensely disliked that he continually had crazy monkey sex with Teyha then told her right afterwards that he didn’t want to hurt her but it didn’t really mean anything except that they were good in bed together.  He’d go on and on about how he didn’t want to hurt her, but he would only be there for a couple of weeks and she’d better enjoy his lovin’ while it lasted because he wasn’t the kind of guy who could give her the happy ending she deserved.  Gah!

Teyha was completely irrational when it came to her personal safety, forgetting all of her training.  Her dad kept Teyha and her mother on the run for years, torturing anyone who harbored them.  He murdered people all over the place, was a slave trader and she ended up having to kill him.  When she finds out his people are probably trying to kill her again, she figures she can take them out all by herself instead of using the people who came to help her.  Oh, and she keeps going back to Jordan and thinking she’ll change him with her magic hoo-ha.

Anyone who’s read any of Leigh’s books knows that there’s going to be pages and pages of hot, hot sex, and there is.  If there isn’t danger or arguing, there’s sex on every available surface and like any standard Alpha, Jordan’s really into growly dominance things, like….anal sex.  It’s a thing with Leigh’s books, an “ultimate claiming.” So, yeah.

I have a huge gripe with Live Wire – with most of Leigh’s books, but with Live Wire it’s become more obvious.  The editing is getting so sloppy it’s nuts.  For an author and imprint of this caliber, it’s ridiculous for there to be so many spelling, grammatical and continuity errors.  There have always been issues with the Elite Ops and SEALs series’, but this is the worst so far.

My Summary: It rarely matters how bad the plots and characters of these books are, I keep coming back to them like they’re truffles and I’m jonesing for a chocolate fix (always) in the hope that this one will turn out to be a gem because every once in a while, it is one.  This is one of the mediocre sparklers in the series – not the best, not the worst.  Leigh always delivers the steam, even though it tends to overshadow the story sometimes.  Live Wire does give a nice wrap-up for Jordan’s team and some action with all of the former members of it, plus a sentimental (and slightly cheesy) little look ahead for the new books to come.  With the horrific editing, this honestly ought to have been rated a D, but there’s something about a chest-beating Alpha guy with lots of weapons that inspires me to grade up a little bit.

My Rating: C

Barbara

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Road Signs

Road SignsBy MJ Fredrick

Publisher: Carina Press
Publication Date: March 14, 2011
Genre: Contemporary Romance
Source: Netgalley

Briefly captivated by the idea of romance and pretty, shiny weddings, Willow Hawkins agreed to meet her potential boyfriend’s family and quickly realized she’d made a mistake.  Stranded in small-town Nowhere, Willow calls her best friend, Cameron Trask, for an escape.

Even though he’ll miss an important job interview, Cam comes to her rescue.  When Willow starts to see Cam with new eyes, she wonders how she never made the connection from best friend to best lover.  Willow has one chance to help the man she loves – join him on a cross-country road trip to get to the interview on time.  On the way they’ll face a jealous puppy, an unreliable automobile and weather that threatens to trap them alone..together.

The biggest roadblock she’ll come up against?  If Cam gets his dream job, Willow may lose him for good.

Goodreads Summary

At loose ends for Thanksgiving since she and her best friend Cam decided not to go to his sister’s house like they always do, Willow made the impulsive decision to go to her new boyfriend’s parents’ home instead.  Big Mistake.  Her first clue was when her boyfriend’s mother started showing her the house next door – the house that Willow was going to live in after she married her son.  Then the previously-normal boyfriend started going frat-boy/caveman on her in front of his friends and getting angry with her when she tried to remind him that they were only dating casually.  In a panic, she grabbed her luggage and made a break for it, calling Cam, begging him to rescue her and bring her home.

Willow’s call put Cam in a bind for more than one reason.  He’d been trying to distance himself from her for a while, stretching their contact out to just some phone calls a few times a month now.  He’s been sick in love with her for years and it’s just time to move on.  He’s got his dream job interview lined up halfway across the country in a few days and if he gets it, he won’t even need to be anywhere close to her anymore.  He doesn’t have a car either, so he has no idea how he’s supposed to pick Willow up anyway.  Hearing the panic in her voice though, he can’t say no and when he gets to her, rather than tell her about the job interview and that he needs to get to Seattle, he takes her where she wants to go, to his sister’s place for Thanksgiving.

Cam comes clean about his job interview the next morning, when he plans to send Willow back to her place with his brother while he continues on by himself.  When his plans get screwed up, she decides since she’s the one who interfered in the first place, it’s her job to get him to the interview, but the train and flights are all booked so they’ll have to drive the entire way there.  Cam can’t decide if it’s going to be torture to be with her, a chance to get her out of his system or a chance to finally make her notice him.  For her part, Willow feels something different for Cam but she doesn’t know what it is or if she’s even interested in finding out.

I love, love, love the friends to lovers trope.  I’m even capable of being happy with a healthy dash of unrequited love mixed in, as long as it doesn’t involve anyone who’s TSTL.  I really wanted to like this because there were things about it that were lovely to read, but there were too many times that I just didn’t think Willow was likeable or that the situations she and Cam found themselves in were close to believable, even for Romancelandia.

Willow was completely a Type-A personality, career-driven woman to Cam’s more tentative, almost beta guy.  This job interview was more than just a meeting to Cam, it represented a clean break from everything Willow.  Yet when she called him to come get her, he was reluctant for about a minute before he caved.  At nearly every obstacle the two encountered on their trip west to the interview - and there were many, this was a long, long trip and whatever could go wrong, did - he kept taking it as a sign that maybe he wasn’t meant to take this job.  Cam constantly searched for reasons to keep waiting for Willow and she kept giving them to him without ever really promising him everything.

Willow has a mother who only depends on other men for money and as a result, resolved never to be without a career or her own income.  It made her totally focused on her job to the exclusion of a romantic life with any meaning.  She never even paid that much attention when Cam started drifting away, except in retrospect.  When he came to pick her up, she noticed he’d made some physical changes and she felt odd about it.  When she found out about his job interview, she felt odd and sad about it.  When he needed help getting west to his interview she felt responsible for it.  As their interminable drive continued, she felt attracted to Cam, but she didn’t want a relationship with him really, and she didn’t admit that she loved him.  She knew how he felt – he never hid it and even told her about it – but she didn’t reciprocate, even after they were together.  Her lack of any real emotional investment in his feelings, whatever her reasons, made her very hard to like.  Worse, the longer the trip dragged on and the less likely it looked that she’d ever figure out what she felt for Cam, the sadder he looked for waiting for her at all.

While this had some funny moments and elements that were road-trip funny (like rooms with heaters that worked at one stop and wouldn’t turn off at the next), this isn’t a romantic comedy.  In the case of the heaters for example, the hot room was used so they could be tortured by each other wearing next to nothing.  The erotic elements were nicely done and the one area where Willow and Cam could come together perfectly without any imbalance.  I liked them there – they ought to have gotten there earlier.

My Summary: I turned this story over in my head a lot after I read it and I wondered if part of the problem I had with Willow was that for a friends to lovers trope, there just wasn’t a lot of back story to show why Cam loved her in the first place, so all I had to go on was what I saw of her here and I didn’t like much of it.  In this day and age of planes and trains getting you anywhere (even the weekend of Thanksgiving), a long, necessary road trip plagued with every mishap you can think of probably wasn’t the most plausible plot choice but it was still a unique way to throw Cam and Willow together, even if I thought he deserved better.

My Rating: C

Barbara

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Lucky Leprechaun Giveaway

Welcome to my stop of the Lucky Leprechaun Giveaway Hop, organized by Books Complete Me and I Am a Reader, Not a Writer.
The giveaway is open from March 17th until 11:59 p.m., Sunday, March 20th.
I’m giving away a $25 gift certificate to Amazon.com to be e-mailed to the winner. This giveaway’s for U.S. only, but the next one in a couple of months will be for international entrants as well, I promise!
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