Review: Spellbinding by Maya Gold

Spellbinding
By Maya Gold

Publisher: Scholastic Point
Publication Date: April 1, 2013
Genre: Young Adult Paranormal
Source: Netgalley

There’s more than one way to be powerful . . .

It is during a routine school project that Abby Silva–sixteen and nearly friendless–makes a startling discovery: She is descended from women who were accused of witchcraft back in 1600s Salem. And when Abby visits nearby Salem, strange, inexplicable events start to unfold. Objects move when she wills them to. Candles burst into sudden flame. And an ancient spellbook somehow winds up in her possession.

Trying to harness her newfound power, Abby concocts a love potion to win over her longtime crush–and exact revenge upon his cruel, bullying girlfriend. But old magic is not to be trifled with. Soon, Abby is thrust headlong into a world of hexes, secrets, and danger. And then there’s Rem Anders, the beautiful, mysterious Salem boy who seems to know more about Abby than he first lets on.

A reckoning is coming, and Abby will have to make sense of her history–and her heart–before she can face the powerful truth.

Goodreads Summary
Add to your shelf

I’ve always been fascinated by the history, theories and stories surrounding the Salem witch trials so I loved the creeptacular references to it in the synopsis of Spellbinding. I was hoping for a YA story with an unusual twist incorporating some of the Salem mythology, but the only thing unusual about Spellbinding was how many clichés and overused YA tropes were stuffed into a single story that I still was able to finish.

There may be a few stray spoilers included in my review. I was unhappy with the book and since I’m going to explain why, there will be some examples.

I want to start out by saying my displeasure wasn’t all because Banks is an unskilled author. Technically, Spellbinding is better than a lot of what’s passed through my Kindle lately, with blessedly proper punctuation and grammar and a style that made the story flow in spite of its flaws. I’ve read much worse books, but this is a waste of authorial skill and that really annoys me.

Abby is the quintessential YA MC: the oblivious swan waiting to be unveiled, the effortlessly brilliant nerd, the misunderstood and maligned “other” child left in a single parent home touched by tragedy and loss and the girl who has been chosen by fate to have mysterious powers that haven’t been seen in centuries. She has an unrequited crush on the gorgeous sports star that’s kind and popular but dating the nastiest mean girl at school who has her own clique of followers. Do I really need to go further? Just fill in the blanks – if you’ve read YA, you already know them.

Headaches and nightmares that she’s drowning have recently begun plaguing sixteen-year-old Abby. Spacing out in class due to lack of sleep and her crush on Travis, the school’s perfect jock, earns everyone an extra assignment: mapping their family trees. Her dad’s side is easy enough but her mother’s side sends Abby in search of answers in…wait for it…Salem. Because as she begins her search, she rather easily finds that there was someone involved in the witch trials with her mother’s name and coincidentally, she has a previously unknown relative who’s a little batty in a nursing home who’s the missing link Abby’s looking for. I’m loathe to even mention it, but as long as I’m whining about clichés, I have to give my examples: this relative who is barely lucid is able to speak to Abby in her mind and urgently delivers her a message that clearly warns her about her future as a powerful witch.

Abby’s already been having witchy twitches, doing little things like inadvertently causing things to happen whenever she thinks about them strongly enough. When she arrives in Salem, it feels right, as does her mysterious connection to the hot, enigmatic Rem, who seems to show up wherever she does. She easily finds a part-time job (mystical shop, ‘natch), a spell book that strangely falls into her hands and parking is never a problem.

Is there a love triangle? Well, we have a girl with witch powers and access to a spell book with a major crush and an odd connection to another hot guy in Salem, home of the witch trials she feels like she was a part of. Once Abby started flexing her paranormal powers, my favorite parts were those that flashed me back to Stephen King’s Carrie, since I love my crazy girls raining paranormal vengeance down on the horrible people. The ending was simply horrible though. There are deus ex machina that work and there are those that just leave me speechless in amazement over what they’ve done to the story. I have nothing to say about this one.

As I said, this somehow managed to be readable to me and finishing it wasn’t that difficult, even while I was grinding my teeth at its predictability and pieces of samey-ness to dozens of other books I’ve read. There’s no sexual content beyond kissing and the limited amount of violence might keep this suitable enough for the topmost upper middle grade readers.

I agonized over the distinction between giving Spellbinding a C or a D, because I kept thinking readability had to count for something. In the end though, this wasn’t a lack of pizzazz or something that fell flat. It was a book that missed the mark entirely for me because there wasn’t any originality. I wouldn’t write Gold off, because she has skill, but I’ll be waiting to read others’ reviews before I buy.

My Rating: D
sig Barbara

Share on Tumblr

Comments

  1. Awe man! I was thinking about picking this one up, but I might just hold off and try my library first. The Salem Witch Trials is something that I have always found interesting too. Thanks for sharing your honest thoughts.

    Jenea @ Books Live Forever

    • Unfortunately, there’s almost nothing about the witch trials. Abby’s connection to one of the women involved is about the only mention of it, the actual period facts of the incident get all twisted into a paranormal YA muddle. :( I wanted to like this one so much. This was painful.

  2. That is disappointing to hear it has so many cliches and doesn’t make full use of Salem and it’s history. Very nice review.

  3. Well, I’m glad I didn’t request this title then!
    I thought we were over the whole cliched YA phase. Turns out, I was wrong. It’s too bad though, because I really do like witch stories and I haven’t found many that were epically awesome.
    There’s just too much in this book that I will not enjoy : cliched MC, love triangle, overused plot. Yeah, whatever, I’m skipping this.
    I’m surprised that you managed to read the whole book!
    Fabulous honest review, Barb! :)

    • You dodged a big ol’ bullet, my friend. lol I keep looking for a great witch story too – I don’t think it’s going to be a YA one though. Maybe I’ll try that Weird Girls series by Cecy Robson that’s been getting some good reviews.

  4. Ooo cupcake we so agreed on this one..my review posts next week I think and yeah..it was readable but so is a recipe but it doesn’t make it a good one.

  5. Crap. I have this scheduled soon and since it was the most requested title on NG for awhile there I was hoping for something great, but this is the second review I have read that is not so flattering. I will slog through it and see how I feel about it. Thanks for the heads up. I guess at least the writing is good that counts for something.

    • Oh dear. Well, I’m definitely going to be glued to your blog to see what you thought, since I’m never, ever there. ;) Some of it may be dependent on how much YA you read – I lost track of how many things I’ve read before and it’s not bad if it’s a handful of things but when it’s a truckload..ugh.

  6. I am trying to get through reading this ARC. Sadly I don’t find it as readable as you, but I am trying my hardest not to give up. Your review doesn’t give me much hope of it getting better though.

    • Um..well, all I can say is that you have to read the ending to really get the full “experience” of this one. :D Make sure you have something to cushion your jaw. In all seriousness, towards the end, it gets almost comically over-the-top Carrie/The Exorcist/Witches of Eastwick/whatever nutty.

      Keep going! Rah, rah, rah. *waves pom poms*

  7. Lisa @silverlight00 says:

    It’s too bad this one seemed to fail on so many levels. I love Salem, Mass and have visited on more than one occasion. I love the aura, and history of this sleepy, little city, so I was so looking forward to reading it, but after reading your review, as well as some of the comments I think I’ll pass on this one.

    • It was just such a miss for me. :( I don’t usually have them that are this far off of the mark that I can even get through. There wasn’t enough of Salem used to even make it atmospheric – it could have been set anywhere, which was sad.

  8. Ooh noooo, I have been really looking forward to this one, I’m a tad tired of the same ol’ YA cliches so think I’ll now pass on it.

    Salem and the witch trials has always interested me & the premise sounded so fascinating so it’s a shame it was a disappointment,

    A wonderful, honest review :)

    • I definitely think passing would be a good decision if you’re tired of those cliches. There wasn’t much in here that wasn’t one, it was such a waste of decent writing. It was like YA Mad-Libs or something. :) I almost wish I could figure out how to do spoiler tags here so I could say how it ends, it was so bad. lol

  9. Great review hon. I think its a hit or miss with this one, depends on ones mood. I saw some really decent reviews :) hopefully I can still get a chance to reading this soonish. The plot does look decent!

  10. erg a total Cookie cutter book huh? Glad I decided to stay away.
    Pabkins @ My Shelf Confessions

  11. Amy S Rhodes says:

    I think this book sounds fantastic. I’ve already put it on my tbr list (which grows exponentially). It’s going to be fabulous! !

This is an awards-free blog; we appreciate the thought but we just don't have time to reciprocate. I heard a rumor that someone slid virtual chocolate under the door once and it was well-received.

Talk to me! I love to hear what you have to say and will comment back.

*

20,808 Spam Comments Blocked so far by Spam Free Wordpress